Hello! This is my first time putting a coord together and I just want to get it right! I really really don’t want to be an ita.
(not pictured: white tights)
Response from Lolita Tips:
Oh no. I’m so sorry but that dress doesn’t look very good. I hope it looks better when it’s worn but the shape looks awful on the hanger. I actually think adding the lace was a bit of a mistake because it just looks like it was sort of thrown on. I think the lace around the waist looks okay, but I would remove the lace from the neckline. I would also remove the white bow because it just looks like you threw a huge pile of bows on top of eachother. I also don’t think the necklace suits the style of the dress very well. It’s sort of chunky and not very elegant at all. The bow is hard to tell how it looks though without seeing it worn.
Also, what about a petticoat and shoes? Those are bother very important aspects of a coord that you didn’t include.